Welcome to the writing collaborations forum. There are going to be a few rules to ensure minimal drama:
Rules:
--Since this part of the forum is help become a better writer - serious critique is allowed. There will be no "petty" or "immature" critique.[/list]
--Since you're working with the other writer - be patient with their response. Not everyone sits online like a complete shut in.
--Each collab gets it's out forum post. There shouldn't be multiple forum posts for each collab. Meaning no seperate forum posts for different parts and/or chapters.